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MichaelJ
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I really liked it – it flows well. A few little things caught my eye, and these are just how I’d do it, not mandates and barely suggestions. Though I think I’m right on the punctuation. 😀

No commas in the “Three days after …” sentence.

Is it correct to show “compassion for … loss” as opposed to sympathy?

I’d add “event”: The “Flags on the 48” event was given life.

Instead of “… lost. Yet the feedback …” I would do “… lost; however, the feedback …”

No comma after “continues to honor”
Add a comma after “tragic losses”
No comma after “Armed Forces”